Perhaps not open to it's half,
Perhaps just somewhat opened;
Like a solid part
of what mostly seems insane
Opened enough for you to notice
I'm not here
Probably I'm in the goblet,
in which the souls of the dead creatures are
Goblet:
Created out of weakness
You'd said
Not in those words
But close enough my flaws
The defect of the soul;
Like it's sold to this stranger
The one - that one
Whom talking
She's singing - the voice is the hymn
of an insane
Fewer flaws
Wouldn't help me out
Now
The mind is set on pause mode
The cabinet is closed
Very closed; barely unspeakable
You'll see
The every secret thing
The remains
Wisdom - thoughts worth repeating
Outstanding knowledge
What you'd do in a case of this sort
Unfortunate occurrences
They'd show their faces
even to the most fortunate
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Skrivpuff 23/1-17: "Färre"
Eller i min Engelska text "fewer" ;)
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/Oraklet
Jag tycker om dikten!
SvaraRaderaJättefin dikt.
SvaraRaderagillar "mind set on pause mode"
SvaraRaderaFint! Jag är ingen expert, men för mig är du mer än kapabel att skriva dikt på engelska.
SvaraRaderaFin språkrytm. Den känns väldigt rätt när man läser den .
SvaraRadera